Light
Emitted and absorbed
light,
obvious and mysterious,
These glimpses
create more questions.
Surface afterglows,
in evening air
Sunset,
now
gloomy place
colours removed.
City lights glow
sky masking
three thousand
hesitant pinpricks,
Cosmic energy
flung
clusters and scatters
Universe wide.
Particles float on
turbulent atmosphere,
Light is bent,
Stars twinkle.
light,
obvious and mysterious,
These glimpses
create more questions.
Surface afterglows,
in evening air
Sunset,
now
gloomy place
colours removed.
City lights glow
sky masking
three thousand
hesitant pinpricks,
Cosmic energy
flung
clusters and scatters
Universe wide.
Particles float on
turbulent atmosphere,
Light is bent,
Stars twinkle.
This poem came from a search at first on light, then sunrises and finally stars.
WALT: To write a poem that communicates creatively my thoughts.
Success Criteria:
WALT: To write a poem that communicates creatively my thoughts.
Success Criteria:
- The words we pick fit together
- The ideas work together line by line
- To use punctuation to enhance the meaning and help the reader.
- I have added my own thoughts to put in my voice.
- To credit the sources that I used.
