On inside rain-trapped days....

My eyes remember
Bush dark ferns, manuka trunks,
Sunlight strokes,
Shaping shadows,
My feet remember
dirt track, dust covered boots,
My face remembers
light breeze just stirring,
My body remembers
stationary silence- leaning to beauty,
My heart, my mind remembers
peaceful colours, tranquil contrasts.

Sunset dips,
Night bucket fills,
Painting black.

WALT:
To communicate an experience, with descriptive language, so that others can feel they are there.

Success Criteria:

• Others can feel they are there, remember times like this themselves.
• To capture a memory using the 'feeling' sense mainly.
• Short simple thoughts, one per line
• To use ellipsis (can be used to indicate a pause in the flow of a sentence), fullstops and capital letters.
• Unnecessary and small words cut out.